Khasm13 : black and white rainbows...

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  1. Khasm13

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    thru tainted goggles
    i peer out at varing landscapes
    with dog eyes i hornswoggle
    hearts held in hand
    which i easily toggle
    with help from da bottle
    i commit to a life of trickery
    my dog eyes have
    motivated my slickery
    love is an idea that's worn out and plaid
    in todays time the important thing
    is getting laid
    with no strings attached
    unsuspecting ladies hands get snatched
    when me and my squad are dispached
    oh, so your catching feeling now?
    sorry, to no one are my hands latched
    in time your hearts wounds will be patched
    that's if you stay away from cats like me
    who bounce from bed to bed
    like bed mites on da back of fleas
    save your pleas
    cause i've heard them all before
    bout how you see in me a good man
    and that's why you opened your door
    please hun
    staying with the same woman is a chore
    then i met this sister who made my mouth
    drop to the floor
    with this bad sister i saw myself
    wanting more
    more of that sugar sweetness
    that my life has been without
    in her i saw a beautiful meekness
    but it was all game
    she played me like i played the others
    just the same
    i could not see it coming
    cause color blindess goes with my name
     
  2. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    players play played... you know the circle of Karma...
    You laid this out real nice, K.
    Much enjoyed! Well, written... was that truly "the end"?
    :heart:
    Hey... :wave:
     
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    Hmmmmm...do I dare jump on this note??? :)
    Ok ok I'll leave u alone and just say
    COo scribe :)
    I dont want ya to get annoyed of my long responses LOL
    But it was ...very educational, sad but true fo so many people
     
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    This was the soooooooooooooooooo tyte! Khasm, ur work is always jumpin off.........I never expect less because I know what u bring and it's always real. "Black & White Rainbows" this was cool.

    Much luv,
    A
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really likin' this....this too TOO tyte...
     
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    well well well! your actions came back to haunt you! Tyte scribe and a lesson (well?) I hope taught. loved it!
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks cindy...is anything ever really
    the end?

    triniti...i never get tired of your long responses...
    matta a fact...i uv em...thanks

    angelic...i feel the same way about your work...that's why
    i always check you out...thanks for feeling me on dis joint
    cause i'm in a bad mood today :mad:
     
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    dang khas...you got PLAYED!!! LoL iM sorry:) :laugh: you know I love you. Im sorry thatyou're in a bad mood sweetie, I hopeall is well
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Khasm,

    This is a wonderful piece!! I hope things get better for you.

    Peace.

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    hey khas.......

    YOU BETTA FIX YO FACE BEFORE I REALLY GIVE U SOMETHIN TO CRY ABOUT!!!
     
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