Black Poetry : Black and Blue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 2, 2010.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgive me,

    Should I aggravate

    Old wounds of our slavery

    Hurtful till the present day

    Lasting EVERYDAY

    EVIL,

    Devil incarnate

    On the level ~

    OBSTINATE

    Lashes beg for

    BLACK revenge :bully:

    Still the body aches

    Criminals lacking magistrates

    In the wake of NO rebate

    Without measure...

    LIES forsake :em0200:

    Convicting eyes of blue



    Darryl Abdu Omari:whip:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2010
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    they always say da devil eyes not red, yet blue
    da evil lurks in !
     
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    Brother!!!

    I've ALWAYS felt your style of scribin'! You say so much with few words...that's the mark of TRUE poetic genius!! This scribe is no different. AWESOME!!!!
     
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    incomparable writing style never misses the point in its unique swagger...
    on point son.
     
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