Black Haiku : Bittersweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Mar 18, 2002.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She sat in shadow
    he strolled through fall with her friend
    murder found a home.







    On A Continuous Journey
    Gypsyman
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    WoW !!!! :eeek:

    An entire story ... in 3 little lines !!!!

    Great Work!
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: I
    :spinn: Really
    :spinn: Love
    This :spinn: Uniquely
    :spinn: Written
    :spinn: Haiku


    Your sista in Haiku...Joyce
     
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    what an excellent piece!!

    That last line was most powerful!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    outstanding haiku u flowed ........beautiful story
     
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    Gypsyman

    crime of passion
    deep and spills
    the truth.

    I agree with Destee
    this a short story :)
    Very good.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Gypsy..
    as usual...your poetry
    speaks volumes of life's issues..deep haiku

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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