Black Poetry : BITTERSWEET

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bittersweet...

    There came a time
    when I sipped from a glass
    of steaming Bittersweet.

    Life
    offered me
    the good, the
    bad and,
    the sheer ugly.
    I
    found
    myself
    walking down a stairwell of depression and
    illusions.

    Was the grass greener on the other side?

    Or was I drawn away by the lust of my eyes"

    The sweet,
    and Oh-so potent
    Lusts of my eyes...

    I was drawn and held captive.
    Enjoying the sour and sweet deliciousness of
    of this thing i'm in.

    Never
    quite
    noticing
    how sin
    smoothly enticed me
    and
    in the end dragged me part and parcel into the
    arms of death.

    Was it worth it,
    sipping the glass of
    steaming
    BITTERSWEET?

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wyne" Publishing
    ~Capucine
     
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    Poetically insightful...keep em coming. Nothing like poetry to make the mind think.

    ~j
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much honey. you are truly a blessing to me and I'm blessed to receive your love.
     
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    If the car is going to crash, you have to consider the end result, not just he enjoyable ride, yes, quite a bit to think about here.
     
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    very well done poet flow on
     
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    Nice drop , definit feelin this piece
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your vibe watz.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No words can be spoken Rich.
     
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    You are definitely TheOne
     
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    ahhh yes Dior
    this was a beautifully
    scribed piece of Reflection...
    and effective to...
    for as I read...I too began
    to question my own bittersweet
    minglings...throughout life...

    Excellent Read!
     
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