Black Poetry : ...Bittersweet Blood...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tears are sliding down her face
    Nothing ever can erase
    The emptiness she’s feelin’ right now

    Her pillow is no longer damp
    But soaked with tears out of her vamp
    She wished he would come back right now

    He said that he just needed time
    And she wants to say she apologizes
    She knows her accusations were fowl

    She tastes her bitter tears alone
    And sees what it means to feel alone
    Her tears taste like her feelings somehow


    The bitterness of the tears taste like poison
    Everything around her now seems so foreign
    And she doesn’t know how things will turn out

    All she knows is that she can’t take being alone
    If she has to wake up one more time on her own
    She thinks she would go and willingly die right now

    Cuz he’s the love her life and she can’t survive
    Honestly he’s the only thing keeping her alive
    She needs him to come home and kiss her now


    She violently cries herself to sleep
    Her tears turn into bitter weeps
    She cannot take this pain anyhow

    So she slowly walks out of the room
    She walks until she cannot move
    And her gun takes her life right now

    Three minutes later he rushes in
    Terror in his eyes as the blood flows in
    The room onto the floor right now

    He knew that this was over him
    He cried out in hateful venom
    He hated himself so badly right now

    So after little thoughts in mind
    He saw the gun and took his life
    To join his girl in heaven right now

    They ended their marriage in a fight
    But ended up giving their lives
    Because their love was that powerful…
     
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    i like this alot...
    nice flow
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    This love story is both tragic and interesting.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 1poet...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u expressed a emotion of pain & hurt from a cross fire
    dis was felt deep ya pen speaking
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot rich...just thought i'd try somethin' different...
     
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    it was on point ya pen has many faces i see
    most welcome
     
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    this was deep...kinda depressing
     
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    :D thanks rich, that means alot to hear u say that...

    yeah, it is kinda depressing...just tried somethin' different...
     
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