Black Poetry : Bitter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kori, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** your love ... HARD
    I mean, what goes around comes around, right?
    It must be true cuz both our hearts are dizzy. The circles sure got me exhausted...
    so weary to acknowledge the ignorance with which I regarded our love.
    Your lie infested monstrosity placed kisses upon my wet dreams
    fed me promises lacking the r-o-m-i-s-e-s..and I ate them.
    but I was never full cuz TRIX are for kids and I am woman.
    So do to them what you did with your infidelity
    ...keep it to yourself

    I seem to have lost you before I had you, but maybe thats best
    Because until I leave, you won't recognize my value.
    I sacrificed my self-identity for the sake of us.
    For you I traded my better for worse...judgement.
    I became obviously oblivious to the outcome of us.
    In my mind I saw the future. My heart wasn't ready to accept it...
    And you were too preoccupied to do so...
    Too busy admiring the grass on the other side of the fence to mow your onwl lawn :roll:
    The sun shown down on us with a hateful glare

    I regret that we couldn't muster the initiative to continue the long journey
    we, so long ago, began.
    However, I won't place the blame on our indolence...
    Only on our collective inexperience in love's tarnished battlefield.
    I love you more than life, but our opurtunity for a satisfying union is walking out the door.
    ...since your the one running around
    ... the chase is all yours.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word word !!! on ly silly rabbits chase da trix
    womanly u r indeed tyte drop sistah Kori
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop...enjoyed the read
    thanks for sharing.....
     
  4. Alpha Male

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    reply to Kori

    Kori shoots straight to the dome with this poem great and grand
    Don’t we all just hate all cheaters, run around like dogs in heat
    Kori once again you told it plainly, its gonna be their lost


    Great poem you have made
    Please go and seize the day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
  5. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all and Alpha Male since I came back, Ima be checkin out everything. Your thread is first on my list. :D
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some things we have the right to be bitter about...this is one of them. Queens always rise above, I liked the sly but direct way you brought this.
     
  7. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you watzinaname! I appreciate the love. Sly but direct. I like that :D
     
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    WOW KORI, I CAN RELATE. I LOVED HOW YOU EXPLAINED EVERYTHING. INDEED THIS WAS A TIGHT SCRIBE. I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN ABOUT LOVING THAT PERSON FOR LIFE, BUT WHEN TIME IS UP, IT'S UP. MUCH LOVE AND MANY BLESSING SISTAH. PEACE

    POETIC_DIVA

    "I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST, WHICH STRENGTHENS ME" PHILIP 4:13
    :spin: :spin: ;) :nono: :rolling: :rolling:
     
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