Black Poetry : Bitter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 23, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being observant as I am I also got this from my co-worker. Guess I should be doing more work huh lol!!!

    Bitter
    You can't be with me so
    now I am all kinds of names.
    I am not worth your time.
    You find any and every reason
    to be sarcastic.
    You need to say
    something, any thing to me.
    You're hating on my man
    and you don't even know him.
    Why is that?
    Is it that you are feeling
    rejected?
    I couldn't have hurt you
    that bad.
    And I am not intentionally causing you
    any hardship.
    I am starting to think
    that you are just
    bitter.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's not thee be bitter
    but less of whom one claim
    to be now u moved pass the doubts
    only one's foolishness is left to play
    thy Queen of great beauty and soul
    one wish for what was not bitter
    but lone to have .....close da doors
    flow on
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are some that are just like that.

    Bah! Humbug!!

    Good morning?What's so [email protected] good about it?

    But don't let their anger at life make U bitter.

    Really diggin' this one.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never a dull moment here, huh? I liked the way you posed this, some folk just want someone to hurt right along with them, misery loves company.
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's amazing sometimes
    How twisted emotions can get
    What you expressed in this poem is so common today
    You captured the feeling skillfully
    I am always impressed with you ma!


    Keep it flowing


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
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