Black Haiku : Bitter Blue Blues

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  1. Bluewater

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    Mountain High I fly.
    Hiding tears that’s deep inside
    Bitter Blue so Blue

    Tripping not skipping
    Edge flipping to close much to close
    Heart heavy torn thoughts

    Searching for the light
    Blue bitterness dark shadow
    Looking for the light

    Bitter bluing blues
    Mind battle mind crushed
    Love once hurt twice why

    Focusing away
    Fighting certain kinds of needs
    Wanton deepening

    A woman passion
    Body heated like fire
    Stir it up stir it

    Bitter Blue so Blue
    Black and Blue deep marks hidden
    hurt pains spoils of war
     
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    Valley low I fear
    but the shadow is my own
    Bitter Blue so sweet

    Blue sky brighter day
    Sun to take the pain away
    Blue shine like a star

    Blue know who we are
    If it happend once then twice
    Lady sings the blues
     
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    Cool Blue Water
    Sooth pain moist
    Bluing Sweet
     
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    Mo better blues on
    the blue waves cascading in
    still seem bitter cold
     
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    Bitter Blues learned to
    Leave the pain in the past
    Enjoy the R a i n b o w
     
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