Black Poetry : Bite of passion...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Passion of the feeling
    One seeks flows in the blood
    Forth come of the lust turning into passion..
    Release to the air to wrap your soul
    As the spirit escapes
    Undying passion bite of a kiss
    They became the beautiful ones
    A vision in ones mind…the awakening
    Upon the moonlight they stand as one
    As she rise for the first time
    Reborn in a world of unknown
    All within the mind comes to light
    Forth see what you will be in the vision of
    Passion from first bite
    As the tale unfolds a mystery to be held
    As the beautiful ones passion masses
    Within the dark of the night
    For it was the scent of her of him
    Shall be the bite of passion
    Not all what you see shall be seen
    Within a night, the dawn falls as the dark covers
    You shall see what you feel.....
    feel what you shall not see
    The shadow of the dark...became light......
    The shadow of the dark...became light......

    (C) 2004
    bite of passion
    tale of tales of night
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The night time setting just adds to the air of mystery felt in this scribe. Keep the flow coming.
     
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    Bite of passion? Are you hungry MBA? QQ'n :jawdrop:
     
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    Python i see you got jokes....
    actually its a poem from my story
    in part 3 smarty pants....whatever...

    thanks watz for the read

    peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the tale within in da night of passion
    leaves da bite dis was tyteeeeeeee!!
     
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    Hey fam! Yall should
    read the story that
    goes with this poem
    also!

    If you loved this poem,
    You will loveded the
    story!

    This is some
    serious vibing
    Sis!

    Loving it!
     
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    Wow! Nicely written. Passion indeed! Strong Vibes coming from this piece. True Inner Peace to you!
     
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    had to up dis coz it's deep and felt da vibe off it whewwww!!
     
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    Hi Angel! Loved your post! It was full of mystery and...welll, passion! The night-time setting I think completed the air of mystery very well. Great post!
     
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    hhuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    QQ


    You sure U not hungry? U over here and there Biting things.......... :peace:
     
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