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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    only
    allow spiritual
    midwives into
    my delivery room…
    only
    need those that
    can help me push
    past discomfort, unease, and pressure
    to access the vaults
    of heaven and
    fall into the
    reassuring arms of the Divine ABBA.
    only
    allow spiritual
    midwives who
    will assist me
    in breathing and holding…on…
    not giving birth too quickly…
    quick to remove
    and annihilate the presence of
    spiritual abortionists-
    one’s who can sabotage this
    thing being birthed in me.
    realized
    that i am pregnant..i am giving
    birth to something great
    for Elohim…i’m honored
    and esteemed of the
    Lord.
    i
    gladly put my spiritual womb
    at his disposal.


    something great is passin’ thru my ‘birth canal.’




    ©2008 ‘el(OK)utio(NY)st’ Inc.
    ~AgAbus



     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    giving "birth to something"

    is right .. we should always know that which we are creating or callin rather...
     
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    birth of a good write

    so, touchy this subject is. it will be debated for years. birth has been MADE precious, abortions have been made legal. who's to say which one is right? birth is painful. abortions are uncomfortable. babies take money to raise. abortions can be costly. i'm a libra so, i look at things two-fold all the time. pardon my double-sided response. however, good write, thoughtful!
     
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    You want your words to have a certain quality to them, a spiritual flow birthed from within. And so it shall be poet.
     
  5. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh Shai'yn thank you very much...

    Sister Watz...thank you for feeling me. Love ya both


    truth n righteousness...
     
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    Beautifully portrayed, this mental, physical and spiritual journey
     
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    I C U

    babylon will fall...

    write something else about a Calderon or an Asian or some Greek trickery...

    we don't get down with wickedness or Assyrians ....

    we is Kemet....

    u don't want none...
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo you
    already know
    mami.
     
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    A great thing that is....and the Worship and gratefulness of it is even greater...
    Flow on
     
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    Thank you again honey!
     
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