Black Poetry : Birth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ms_MochaB, Aug 11, 2001.

  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STRIKE A MATCH
    SEE A SPARK
    GRASP AHOLD OF THE FLAME

    PERCH YOUR LIPS
    BREATHE IN HEAVILY
    EXHALE (NOW BLOW)

    FLAME TOO CLOSE TO FLESH
    SIZZLED WITH WATER
    CARESSED BY HANDS

    SUCKING SLOWLY TO EASE THE PAIN
    KISSING GENTLY WHERE THE FLESH TOUCHED THE FLAME
    OGLING THE RESULT OF THE NOW INFLAMED PAIN.

    BIRTH ....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    IT MUST BE SOMETHING

    WHAT WOMAN GOES THROUGH IN LIFE
    WHEN GIVEN BIRTH...............................
    I FELT THE TRUTH IN THIS PIECE THAT
    TOUCHED MY INNER HEART .:heart:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    this was so vivid and posed well....thas all i can say...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Using an image of a lit match in this piece...what a creative way of capturing that feeling.
     
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    I think I felt something....thats ow eye opening this was :). Nice write

    -Muse
     
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    indeed just divine uppin dis one back
     
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    This was just jaw dropping
    Hot Piece Poet
     
  8. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    She created me,
    sow in return on investment,
    i create her differently,
    when i create her differently,
    she create me more perceptively,
    the more perceptively she births me,
    me birth a new thought carried on by her reception,
    the perception of giving,
    and one shall receive,
    a metaphysical reality,
    yet she must be turned on,
    vibrating with openness,
    receive me with deep penetration,
    together we are focused,
    help me birth what is not same,
    i am the creator,
    you are the creation,
    you are the creator,
    i am the creation,
    together soulfully,
    we can make change,
    so birth us....

    (Real Poetry)
     
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