Black Poetry : Birth of Sol Star

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UBNaturally, Jan 16, 2014.

  1. UBNaturally

    UBNaturally Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a concept to conceive, the heart is on your sleeve, but you would rather grieve than believe what you can achieve when I take that pain away and show you a day of play that gently cleans the stain off of your tainted sleeve in a way that removes doubt, gaining further understanding within and about.

    The concept grows as the energy flows in the direction of knowledge and ciphered creation, the life manifests because now she knows best, solar rhythm is within, moving without hesitation.
     
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    I like your style/flow and rhyme in this.

    And, although your "concept" is presented with a "solar" theme, I also couldn't help but think of "Sol" as in "Solomon," meaning "peace" and the "Bright and Morning Star."


    "Shalom."
     
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