Black Poetry : Birth of Change

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  1. Manchid

    Manchid Member MEMBER

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    My mind begins to race with a million
    thoughts a minute. Thinking thinking
    and thinking about my life and how I
    have been trying to be righteous but
    society sucks on you until you’re
    lifeless. But bad decisions lead to a
    trife life shouldn’t this mean that
    you live longer. NO. But you do
    grow stronger. Conflicted from
    the realization that this
    civilization is ****** up. I live on
    because I have mouths to feed and
    people to lead so I plant the seed
    of life in my mind and with time
    become pregnant with change. You may
    ask well how can a man be pregnant
    but I am not pregnant in reality for
    a thought is what grows inside me.
    Like a fetus it forms and forms
    into a philosophy or a being but
    this baby you can’t see. So I nurture
    it with my energy my life source
    until it is grown and I let it out
    by force. It becomes more than
    just a thought but a reality of
    change for this baby brings
    conflict but I am willing to die for
    it. For it is the only hope for
    my people so the same way I started
    I leave you. My mind races with a
    million thoughts a minute.
    Thinking thinking and thinking…

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    In the streets I can
    greet ya, about blunts I teach ya.
    Inhale deep like the words of my breath.
    I never sleep, cause sleep is the
    cousin of death.
     
  2. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE DROP! WELL DONE!!!
    KEEP IT COMING!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i'm feeling dis here very well done
    sweet release
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this read and how you used the symbolism of the fetus with the birth of an idea. Well done.
     
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    Manchid...

    I like your style...
    keep dropping it like this...
    cuz I'll def' be looking for
    more of your work...

    ^5 Great Read!
     
  6. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    From physical,
    to mental,
    to emotional,
    to soulful,
    to spiritual,
    seed is planted.
    From spiritual,
    to soulful,
    to emotional,
    to mental,
    to physical,
    anew has sprouted.
    Birth of change,
    take a look,
    from all places,
    if you can,
    then come back,
    where you came from,
    physically,
    think trajectory,
    a righteous continuum,
    bubbled with aura of concise emotion,
    the egg encapsulate gene fertilized,
    she receives soulfully everywhere,
    a name captured sung forever,
    reached reasoned in time and space,
    spiritually she will birth of change,
    giving the world a new wave of generation,
    cause your thought made it in her womb first,
    you took your purpose serious enough,
    with much preparation and understanding,
    using wisdom and knowledge,
    the know how to go all the way,
    peacefully and loving counted,
    though you will not be the last,
    so always make sure,
    your loving thought,
    from your most intimate session,
    of sexually becoming one,
    last forever and ever and ever,
    the birth of change from my heart,
    is my real fantasy come true endeavored.

    (Tutu Ihy Shayheh: Rose of a Lifetime) Copyright 2014
     
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