Black Poetry : Bin(HER)ry System (Binary System*)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She.......moved
    .......I...............moved
    in an orbital
    mode
    swinging
    elliptically 'til
    the mood bore rings
    that surrounded us

    We became a twin of
    Saturn neighbor
    to Jupiter and cousin to
    Neptune

    while in motion
    our "e mo tons"
    attracted protons and
    we were positively charged
    with three counts of life
    two-gether

    Our former life we were wed spirits
    Our current life as lovers
    Our after life as wet spirits

    We took on a physical form to
    embrace each other
    just to......................perish
    once again / ride bareback
    on the wind along the
    circumference of our
    essential existence.

    (c)2001 blakverb

    *binary system - a pair of closely spaced stars that orbit each other
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You are too much for the K.I.D. ...... and this is definitely a tight piece!
     
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    Welcome Home!!!

    Welcome home!!! and you have made a very nice entrance i must say!!!! Tight scribe indeed....:wave:
     
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    verb,

    i am laying down my pen. i cannot possibly keep up to such a gift...when you start giving lessons can i be the Poetic Kid? :D

    keep scribin poet for your gift will make room...
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll! it took a while for a brother to make it home but I did.

    one love,blak
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    UMM UMM MMM!!! ....

    (& that's all that i can say) :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
    GA_Sunshyne, May 12, 2001
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is too good! Loved it poet--Ra

    :cool:
     
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    great work blak! ;)
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    Umm...Umm..Umm...good maybe? Thanks queen...my southern peach.

    one love,blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra,

    Thanks brother. I know you wrote a book, maybe several. How do I go about getting one? We need to support one another.

    one love,blak
     
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