Black Poetry : Bills Unpaid

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I see that you left bills unpaid
    The time you easte and the things you said
    I guess you let my kindiness go straight to your head
    I see now that unpaid bills
    Reflect back on you
    You leave more thatn justy payments way past due
    I can't get you to get up and do
    What needs to be done on time
    I guess you'd really rather be in at the club
    than pay the bill to have water to wash up

    You don't understand how much the small things say about
    The person you truly are
    Beyond all that you say you posess
    I see that you are full of emptiness
    And unfinished business like your bills
    you waste time and money on cheap thrills
    I want you to get yourself together and Figure out which way
    You really want to go
    Tyr to be more of you
    That's what I think would be best
    I guess once that is completed you owuld
    Probably stop bouncing checks
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Unpaid

    Excellent Write. Staighten him out, gurl.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got to attend to those bills, before leisure time thrills. Very nice flow about getting those priorities in order.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem. That last line was funny!
     
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    O' snap dem bills now u spill da will so he can feel da deal
    tyte drop
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you I appreciate the love.:)
     
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