Black Poetry : Big Time Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 10, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tall long pillar columns lined across the hall.
    Tapestry unfolding. Silk upon the walls.
    Culture bound with music. Literature and art
    as you walk across the floor.
    Surrounding your beauty.
    I’m alone with my thoughts.
    Memories of a time.
    Keeping others out while
    I hold the door for you.
    Waiting to play my
    part in your life.

    Standing in the dark. Others grab for your time.
    Unroll the orders, waiting to play my part.
    You’re dressed in fine linens wrapped up in
    your gowns. Shakespeare lyric questions.
    Making funny sounds. World spinning what
    a beautiful image. Dreams so clear I smile.
    Touching what I think of you.
    Harps play, make no noise.
    I try to speak. Broken quill delights you.
    Writing verse, I came alive.
    Record the story and this time.
    All can’t turn the wheel.
    Sit uphold the classic.
    Struggling together.
    Proving the battle is real.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee this was poetic love at its best, "classic",
    a love so beautiful........so perfect, you wait in silence
    for your turn to touch, hoping yours is the one.
    The imagery in the beginning, really captivates the imagination.

    Beautiful Love "Big Time"

    Angelic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful display of poetic love indeed
    keep da ink dropping
    i truely love'd dis one
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this one was a scribe that made a sista SIGH in sincere mystifying emotion :)
     
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