Black Poetry : Big Draws get Drowned

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BIG DRAWS GET DROWNED

    I wear the big, big Draws
    Perfect fit for her Shark like Jaws
    Just submit to the drums of Love
    Turn your lips into a velvet glove

    A hundred & Twenty seconds Later
    Now I’m ready to sleep after I Lather
    It’s a crime, U see the robbery of her
    Cuz she didn’t get her’s after the slobber

    The Revenge:

    She tied her pannies around my throat into a knot
    She said it wasn’t nice that I left her so Hot
    She forced my tongue to ripple her “G” spot
    Until Moses gushed water from her body rock

    My Big Draws kept me a float
    Until I drowned after she threw me off her Boat
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Big Draws

    this is a funny post. I like this write. :wave:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Was there a lesson to be learned in this? Hope so....Tee Hee. This was funny, thanks for this drop.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: you so krazzzzzie this was a nice twisted one


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twisted, but cool. :)
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U R NASSSTTEEEE but this was truely off tha chain....keep maintainin' and watch out for dem panties and gushes!!! :lol: :lol: :roll: :roll:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol eroticness bad boy dis was phat !!!!
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    no question-- your erotic and funny flow
    kept me smiling from head to toe
     
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