Black Poetry : Big Brown Eyez

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    slumbering deep
    in the depth of
    ya big brown eyez
    tell the story of
    love and desires
    as they speak to me
    in the twinkle shine
    they open a divine
    rapture commonly
    caressing my soul
    my body yearn for
    the moment as i
    cascade deep into
    ya eyez of essence
    and at first light
    wake up they call me
    i love how u bat ya eyez
    i love how u blink 'em
    i love da way look at me
    wit them big brown eyez
    dancing in the beauty of
    love and sight that just
    have me going wild
    so my belove i river inside
    ya eyez and tell da story
    as u sparkle like stars above
    and gleam like da glisting grain
    of sand tingling my heart
    becoming feverish inside
    ya big brown eyez
    :eek:hmy: :heart: :heart: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :heart: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you on a roll i see tonight!!!

    something bout them big
    brown eyez *smiling*
    you dont leave nothing untouch do you?
    within the eyes are the hidden secrets
    of ones heart and soul...very nice
    likes the smoothness of this scribe

    :kiss:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhh yes...
    the windows to the soul

    loving this flow! :spinstar:
     
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    I loved this $Rich$. Very, very sweet. Nothing like looking into the eyes of someone you love or admire
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MR $$R$$,

    Seems it has been so long since I heard you voice and yet it still sets a tune in my heart that I love to hum as I make my way through the day.

    Nice Piece

    Smooches!!!
    Thatgirl
     
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    sweetbrownsugar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh, I liked this one. I think the eyes...especially Big Brown ones....tell it all.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel...... indeed i see deep inside da eyes

    thankz sage........ yes they are da window to a soul to look in

    thankz jazzy........ u know it's divine to look into them eyez

    thankz thatgirl.......ya words was warm and make me look deeper

    thankz sweetbrownsugar.....yes it do tell a story within them

    Big brown eyez can make u hypnotize in a maze of love and see
    within the hidden secrets and tell da story inside them brown eyez .
     
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    datz how they get u pa
    putty in a womanz handz :D
     
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    Much can be seen while gazing into someone's eyes. Yes...the windows to one's soul...Very intriguing write.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, that's so pretty!
     
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