Black Poetry : Big Bear Lake (In The Morning)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (the plan)


    ...because he is a nature lover
    I was thinking that
    tomorrow morning
    I will flutter-tongue his
    long lashes and kiss
    his eyelids
    gently ~ not enough
    to wake him....

    but just enough to stir
    his senses

    his sleeping visions
    will capture me
    hovering above him in
    dream-time

    he'll have no memory
    of life before
    we came together
    for the hundredth time
    (the first time)

    slowly, my fingers will
    stroll his body's
    luxurious length
    he'll move
    & moan
    & smile

    & stretch and open
    himself to me
    to feel my full
    caresses upon his
    mocha skin

    with relish
    and
    great tenderness

    my lips will bring him
    long, beautiful, and
    wide awake

    to share the
    joys of fresh morning
    mountain
    dew


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah gurl

    i felt the rumble in this piece
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    you flutter-tongued this beautifully, cause this is a good plan sis. Real good plan.
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I woke up extra early this morning..just to feel your morning dew

    Another treasure from your chest

    *how-do-you-dew*

    ;)
     
  5. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...and the evening and the morning

    was the first day....."

    And a blind wo/man can see, this is GOOD! Do yo dew like y'all be doin, sis! :D

    J
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another treasure from this awesome attic...Mercy!

    BE
     
  7. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you must know

    you are my role model....

    And this is a plan that will guarantee lasting love and devotion.

    "mercy!"

    SWT
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a..you must have all the men wishin they could wake up like this every morning...the temperature in that attic just keeps risin'...

    K
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, big sis', thank you for revealing the plan. if this isn't tyght, gurl, i don't know what is! keep on blessin' us wit ya' tyght scribes...i am foreva watchin' ya bring em' down from the attic and whereeva else they r comin' from. always lovin' it!
     
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