Black Poetry : BiCuriosity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NapturallyYours, May 22, 2007.

  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In a word, she’s breath-taking
    The epitome of femininity
    Powerfully radiant
    People hang on her every word
    She’s a natural leader, grounded in logic and reality
    Confidence exudes from every pore of her sensual body
    The swell of her voluptuous child-bearing hips sway with each step she makes
    The S-curve of her back accentuates her luscious, round behind
    Her face is exquisite; every feature is as it should be
    Nothing from the crown of her head to the soles of her feet is out of place
    Her lips are pouty and beg for kisses
    Light-brown maple syrup eyes bespeak of her wisdom
    Justin can’t even bring Sexy Back without her
    Dime-pieces can’t buy her allure
    This woman broke the mold!
    Men recognize her wifey potential
    Women sin as jealousy and lust consume their minds and spirits
    Engulfing them with the need to be like her
    Why am I so intrigued and seemingly filled with bicuriosity?
    It’s just sometimes I can’t believe this captivating woman is me

    ©Napturally Yours
    May 2007

    P.S. Every now then you need to do a little ego-trippin. LOL!
     
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    You're so vain... and deservedly so.

    A wonder, this young writer is.
     
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    Anyone who can pen a piece this tight, is justified in taking an ego trip. Guess like James you had to jump back and kiss yo self, huh? I really enjoyed this scribe poetess.
     
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    go head sis take yo bow .....
     
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    lol

    very very good poet

    you took me for a ride here

    hahahaha

    feeling the strengthe here poet

    4real
     
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    May I say...i'm diggin this mami!
     
  7. NapturallyYours

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    Thank you all for taking the time to read my piece. I appreciate all the comments. Thanks for the love!

    Napturally

    :ilu:
     
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    re: Hi

    good-afternoon NapturallyYours,


    just chilling, etc...


    ==
    ==
    This woman broke the mold!
    Men recognize her wifey potential
    Women sin as jealousy and lust consume their minds and spirits
    Engulfing them with the need to be like her
    Why am I so intrigued and seemingly filled with bicuriosity?
    It’s just sometimes I can’t believe this captivating woman is me
    ==
    ==


    indeed the picture u painted is something to behold... self-love is a must as thy usage of certain words has truly left thy king in awe... beautiful on the inside and out, as do continue to embrace this art-form fully... in all more people need to literally examine self, and just smile as each one of us is unique...

    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  9. queentswana

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    Oh boy, now let me see...
    Thinking to myself:thinking: ...how could I top a piece like this?
    Geesh...it ain't easy ...but, what I did learn early in life is...
    NEVER TAMPER WITH PERFECTION!!
    So, all I can do is :bowdown: to the QUEEN!!
    You got it going on prescious.
    Here's to your beauty :toast:

    I enjoyed reading this piece.
     
  10. Sha'iyn

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    brownshugashane

    girl, you fine! and you know you fine.
    curvy and cute
    and your wordplay is so right
    i bet your bedtalk is off-the-chain
    much props

    thanx for the picture
    sha'iyn:love: