Black Poetry : BI POLAR FLOW

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Born given the world without a map

    no one ever had to tell me
    That my colorless is black

    That ole story of betayal
    U know
    judas' kiss

    No clue bout
    being mark'd
    A beast?
    who?
    oh,
    that it miss'd

    Didn't go to kindergarten
    had a creature was ill
    it needed to feed off my charge
    it's ovaries it kill'd

    Always in lauren land
    masterin flow
    Watchin hanna barbara
    and
    underdog was my favorite show

    master of the universe
    she-rah i have the power

    watched he mon too
    took bout an hour

    hangin out in churches
    penecostal
    batist
    catholic

    hand in the air
    i think that's a lil spirit i feel up in here

    love is patient
    love is kind

    real talk bout faith hope and love
    i was in another world with the birds up above

    joined school had no choice
    that mantality is slave

    easily went thru this
    even skipped over third grade

    six grade was a "gifty" protected by thugs
    they call'd me the cool nerd show'd me some love

    by this time still innocent
    age was eleven

    ninty point three the bridge is over
    wow all the way to heaven

    i don't remember not knowing the words to that song
    turn'd it all the way up and just sang along

    criminal minded grlz look sooo good wow i wish i was ready...

    i didn't know

    i just pretended that KRIS was my father.. i loved his flow

    a blunt gettin smoked that couldn't wake up
    that wasn't fair dad but i guess u had to shut a few people up

    got stuck when pac died i was ready to ride
    still livin in baby lond bangin ready to die?

    Now my prince charmin has kissed me
    so i opened my eyez

    and now it's so easy
    to c thru the liez

    but don't get it twisted
    i write rhymes that take flight

    like the rapture
    carryin off leavin just night

    so many ancestors entering one
    today i'll b a mother

    what was that u said bout my sun?

    i don't conjugate vowels... i make them just humb
    i lay on my back

    clear my throat

    say

    ummmmmmmmmm
    ummmmmmmmmm

    i switch up like cybil
    hey it's a personality flaw

    i guess who i am
    is just a luck of the draw

    or maybe it's a mystery
    and i'll keep it at that
    at the max

    clear ur ears for q tip
    i prefer changin beat box
    cause radio is ear wackx
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Yeah, "bi-polar" is RIGHT! You were ALL over the place! lol

    Just stay away from the green and purple crayons, and you'll be aiight! LOL!


    And when you mentioned "Da Bridge," I was like YEAH!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    talking about bi whewwwww!
    this was full of hooks and twist
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    no matter what goes on

    you still have to live

    for you and your kids

    i wish you the best

    trust that
     
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    tight flow....
    but u know kris sparked mad izm in the mid 90's right?
    really dug the storyline...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    yah.. if he like it i love it..

    i didn't start smokn till 22 .... was a ball player in college so i was kinda focus'd on dat

    kinda stay'd away from drugs cause of deacon crackhead .. lol

    big ups Capo.. livin now.... no doubt!!!

    22 started my second cycle...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life can be a juggling act, so many object up in the air, and not enough hands to keep everything moving, yet somehow, we do.
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strangely, I was completely digging that poem. I guess in some strange way to be totally talented, you have to be totally artistic.lol
    It's all good, nobody's perfect, but poets come pretty d@*n close!
    Flow on!, Flow On!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    thank you so much ladies

    was all over the place with that one....

    lol
     
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