Black Poetry : Beyond

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beyond
    What I cannot say
    but must somehow
    put into words
    your spell won't allow
    me to completely exhale
    let alone speak
    thank goodness my pen affords
    me the expression that I seek
    I.....
    I am so, so beyond
    Beyond my own realm
    Perhaps, I don't know, I've entered
    your dimension with you at the helm
    This love is so......
    beyond me, past what I can say
    past all the feelings I can convey
    You've offered me your life, your soul,
    your heart on a platter of gold
    such a sparkling brilliance, I have
    yet to thoroughly hold
    and yet, I feel your arms
    embracing me
    facing me
    telling me that everything
    will be okay
    and that the love will stay
    and sometimes,
    it is beyond me
    how all of this beauty
    could possibly be
    real....
    and yet, it is...Could it be
    beyond that which even I can feel?
    The depth and breath
    of what you pose, is so,
    so beyond me
    your aura secured
    a permanent place
    within me, it has endured
    far beyond what I could
    ever hope to dream
    into a mesmerizing
    lustrous sunbeam
    that burst of beauty
    personified, that is
    you....
    Beyond....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime beyond all reasons and beyond what one hold can't be compaired
    well felt scribe sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No it certainly can't be compared Rich, probably because it is heaven sent. Thank you for letting me know you felt the vibe brotha poet.
     
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    What a dreamy vision you've painted, girl. I pray for the optimism to hope for this.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes hope is all we have, sometimes hope leads us to a pleasant reality. It will come, sista gempis, thank you.
     
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    My dear sister poet...

    If a poem could be more heavenly...
    more divine...
    more lighted...
    more sensually passionate...
    more beyond my vocabulary to convey it...

    I have yet to read it...in my lifetime

    until now...

    You are so freakin gifted...geeze... :jawdrop:

    You need to seek publishing, you've outgrown your shoes here...

    Truly...
    Sage
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage.....Your response is far beyond what I thought I would receive, I am beyond verklempt, so I am beyond words to respond back....You could knock me over with a feather right now, sage...immensely, I thank you poet and sista.
     
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