Black Poetry : Beyond Your Reality

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Sep 6, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you see me
    Beyond your reality
    Can you smell
    The effervecent me
    The energy tickles your imagination
    The passion fuels your desires
    Can you hear
    My heart
    As it beats like a congo drum
    The love it holds deep inside
    Compels lovers to pledge eternity
    Can you see me ?
    Beyond your reality
    The deepeness in my soul
    The imortal me
    The legacy
    That will live
    Way beyond the boundries of human nature
    Can you see
    Me
    Can you dare to stare
    Into my eyes
    And see all the possibilities
    Of you

    Natasha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NOW SISTAH NAT.

    THE BEAUTY U LAID BEFORE US WAS POWERFUL
    A STRONG FLOW OF REALITY & THE MESMERIZED
    EYEZ OF LOVE...........TALK BABY AND SAY DEM WORDZ:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Natasha.


    very, vey nice... indeed.

    i loved the flow of this piece...
    especially the challenge: :)

    "Can you dare to stare
    Into my eyes
    And see all the possibilities
    Of you
    "

    thank you for sharing this!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!

    This was tight! Marvelous flow ma... really diggin the style, verbage and I love the way you flipped it!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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