Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beyond Touched

[robboy2003]

Touched and taken
in gasps and in wonder
What a spell, as I dwell
in the trance he puts me under

Be still my wandering mind
Wanting to let go and just be
As the winds of fate billow around me
Exhilerated flight does astound me

Breathless and restless
I grab hold of my heart
Afraid of where it may lead
If romance takes a false start

And yet...
I allow the breeze to embrace
as he mentally massages my shoulders
and sensually strokes my face
I remain...beyond touched...

Touched and taken in gasps and in wonder. That is so beautiful sister! Your whole piece speaks of a considerate and consummate lover.

Quite beautiful!

 

[queentswana]

Touched and taken
in gasps and in wonder
What a spell, as I dwell
in the trance he puts me under

Be still my wandering mind
Wanting to let go and just be
As the winds of fate billow around me
Exhilerated flight does astound me

Breathless and restless
I grab hold of my heart
Afraid of where it may lead
If romance takes a false start

And yet...
I allow the breeze to embrace
as he mentally massages my shoulders
and sensually strokes my face
I remain...beyond touched...

Awesome display of art, warm and touching with the soul...I love and can relate to this piece, ...^5

 

[watzinaname]

Gee robboy, I'm quite taken by your response, and I humbly thank you.
So kind of you to say queent, glad you liked it so sis, and, hey, welcome back!

 

[robboy2003]

Gee robboy, I'm quite taken by your response, and I humbly thank you.
So kind of you to say queent, glad you liked it so sis, and, hey, welcome back!

Get it copyrighted sis,and yes it is quite good,and I luv it!

It's Sade sensual!

 

[watzinaname]

Gee, thank you again robboy, I'm enjoying your poetry as well.