Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beyond Touched

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touched and taken
    in gasps and in wonder
    What a spell, as I dwell
    in the trance he puts me under

    Be still my wandering mind
    Wanting to let go and just be
    As the winds of fate billow around me
    Exhilerated flight does astound me

    Breathless and restless
    I grab hold of my heart
    Afraid of where it may lead
    If romance takes a false start

    And yet...
    I allow the breeze to embrace
    as he mentally massages my shoulders
    and sensually strokes my face
    I remain...beyond touched...
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista watz:
    I am sooooooo feeln' this piece.
    Lovely write indeed


    Much Luv
     
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    i like this piece my sista. just absolutely in love with it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....the way u painted this had me thinking and beyond touch
    yet clutching me closer wow....watz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 4everluv, happy you're feeling this piece, appreciated.
    In love with it? I appreciate those high kudos nevar, thank you much.
    Deja vu Rich, wow. A philosophy of love can sometimes go beyond what we ever imagined. And other times, well...poetry can reach what arms can't. Thank you brotha.
     
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    Touched and taken in gasps and in wonder. That is so beautiful sister! Your whole piece speaks of a considerate and consummate lover.

    Quite beautiful!:thanks: :thanks: :terrific: :bowdown:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome display of art, warm and touching with the soul...I love and can relate to this piece, ...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee robboy, I'm quite taken by your response, and I humbly thank you.
    So kind of you to say queent, glad you liked it so sis, and, hey, welcome back! :)
     
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    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get it copyrighted sis,and yes it is quite good,and I luv it!

    It's Sade sensual!:welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, thank you again robboy, I'm enjoying your poetry as well.
     
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