Black Poetry : Beyond Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Apr 16, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time
    Our challenge
    And we have to stop merely playing "beat the clock"
    And take a pause
    Even though the time continues on
    And see that we are not
    i repeat, we are not
    Controlled by time
    It is merely another given
    That challenges us in this realm
    Either we lose ourselves in it
    Or we find ourselves
    And discover our existence
    Beyond time
    And continue on
    In our immortality
    That reaches into another place
    Beyond time
    For time runs out
    But we remain
    Time brings with it age
    But we
    Are in our true essence
    Ageless
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely flow likes
    feeling it nice drop
    keep on flowing
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brutha

    rasheed,
    nice...very nice brother..Love the way you shined with Time
     
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    the tick of the clock
    is only a challenge
    to ourselves
    to do whatever that maybe
    and sometimes we become lost in it
    your poem makes me think that
    how time can grow wisdom
    if time is use wisely
    very nice drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte write the time is ticking
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another perspective on the ever ticking clock, guess we should be doing more than playing catch up, deep vibe.
     
  7. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel, thanks for the touch....

    Nita, thanks for the time.....

    Bluewater, thanks for the touch

    RICH, thanks for the time....

    watzinaname, thanks for the touch

    Ever so much

    All, thanks for the touch
    and the time.........
     
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