Black Poetry : Beyond This World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, May 8, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i write poetry from the soul
    if time revolved around the
    earth's axis then love would
    bear fruit and multiply beyond
    control

    i seek knowledge to understand
    between heaven not earthly man
    please comprehend the difference
    between GOD and love for mankind
    so hard to find solace in such a
    hateful place as we stand firmly
    solid face to face

    no time can erase this rapid pace
    we tread in arrival of the darkness
    and gloomy dead sometimes i
    dread this worldly place

    yet uplifted for its betterment to
    find peace of mind encountering
    people so very kind consciously
    a sleep but lying wide awake as we
    forsake the goodness in those
    who hate there's no need for debate

    starting fresh a new to wipe clean
    the slate from my soul as time
    revolves around the earth's axis
    beyond control letting love bear fruit
    past its unworldly youth i speak the
    truth













    lana1287 productions :kiss:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!

    you flipped the script with this one!

    oh shhhh..
    tyte piece

    'sall i can say
    jh.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yeah flowing wit that spirit
    feeling ya PD on some deepness

    dss
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah

    you're my baby boo

    stay true :)

    pd
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    DSS,

    i love your spirit as well

    keep the faith and uplift
    the spirit of others through
    your work ;)

    pd
     
  6. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speaking truth

    and doing it well!!

    let truth's hands reach out and touch all those around you!!! They will be blessed!

    :heart: Aminata
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very enjoyable piece
    and I love the title.
    Thanks. :)


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Aminata,

    you remind me of a familiar poet in the forum

    can't put my finger on it, but it'll come to me

    thanx for the madd love

    may the flow be with you always instead of
    writer's block :lol:

    one

    pd
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Coco,

    you know i love and enjoy your work too

    always :heart:


    pd :)
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is the kind of poetry only the best love can bring...

    say on.... :D

    thank you

    alyce
     
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