Black Poetry : Beyond The Street Border

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is more to life
    then what I see out this windowpane.
    Getting it together to make that move,
    learning that there is
    more to this Ghetto Rule.

    The street smart will be with me,
    the book smart I will sharpen.
    You got to fight
    with the power of the mind.
    To get around this Ghetto rhythm.

    I gonna learn what is out there.
    I gonna make my stand YEAH!
    I gonna shock the ones who said I couldn’t.
    I gonna make it YESSS!

    And when I learn what is beyond the border of my street.
    And when I learn how the other Corporation make that change.
    And when I sharpen the knowledge, that I get from out there.
    I am coming back. And yeah I am gonna share.
    It is For Us, It is A Must...
    Gotta take care of US.
    Peace
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is powerful. Good read. I feel you to the max.

    "The street smart will be with me,
    the book smart I will sharpen.
    You got to fight
    with the power of the mind.
    To get around this Ghetto rhythm"

    You blew me away!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed da mindful power to win battles of life
    tyte scribe
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alizentang ..thank you for feeling me on this...getting ready to battle..sharpening that mind...:heart:

    Hey RICH...it sure is a battle...gotta get ready..for the big pay back....:heart:
    Peace
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo Bluewater!!!
    You're growin up girl!!!
    I can see your talent really shining through this piece!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Play..just trying to let out a message...:heart:
    Peace
     
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    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a magnificent piece
    letz build this ghetto Corporation
    our way
    one
     
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    each one teach one
    lovely message...yesss!
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the bridge to Ghetto Rule and Corporate Law lies in your mind.
    l'm down with the plan :toast:

    *classic*
     
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