Black Poetry : beyond the star

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beyond the star

    it's been an envasion
    of life and decaytion
    of us as a people and life won't let it go
    i see and i wonder why
    who's gonna take the fall
    but when i see you point the finger
    i know its comming no way no way at all

    look beyond the star
    for your days to be longer
    you gotta look beyond the star
    to make your strength stronger
    there's still a sparkle
    still shinning for you
    it's gonna see you there
    it's gonna see you through

    i know there's been days
    when the smoke left some pain
    when cries of babies were taken in vain

    nobody seems to listen
    nobody seems to care
    but you strive to hang on
    til you saw yourself there

    brothers and sisters
    listen to me hear me to say
    this world is slowing passing away
    we've come so far and endure so much
    cannot our past help us
    to understand thus
    we can't make it make it alone
    we need what we lost to carry on
    listen, listen to me we have to say sorry
    we have to give a plea

    whisper (c) 1998
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honest...heartfelt flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow dis was very well felt and welcome to da family
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, I know what you mean, this is our world today... I feel you.

    Quite profound this is


    The Dreamer
     
  5. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your show of love and support, i'm really glad to belong to this tight-knit family of writers and poets

    apage

    whisper
     
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    A plea in earnest, welcome Whisper!
     
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