Black Poetry : Beyond Reality

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you see me
    Beyond your reality
    Can you smell
    The effervescent me
    The energy tickles your imagination
    The passion fuels your desires
    Can you hear
    My heart
    As it beats like a Congo drum
    The love it holds deep inside
    Compels lovers to pledge eternity
    Can you see me?
    Beyond your reality
    The deepness in my soul
    The immortal me
    The legacy
    That will live
    Way beyond the boundaries of human nature
    Can you see
    Me
    Can you dare to stare
    Into my eyes
    And see all the possibilities
    Of you

    Natasha
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    natasha, queen,
    'beyond reality'. this one's consumed with beauty.
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha~

    I can see
    the possibilities of love
    beyond reality
    and much more imaginative
    than fiction
    you see...
    Love be my addiction.

    Needless to say, I felt this.
    Reas
     
  4. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "see all the possibilities of you"

    strong, my sista. hit me in my heart with your words, Poetess.

    thank you

    Bert
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    isn't love a beautiful thing !

    thanks guys for the read

    Much love
     
  6. epiphany

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    Ain't love grand..
    nice piece Natasha..

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.
    I've read the picece twice already.
    The words... the flow... it's a beautiful piece.
    It is in the fact the prime example of why you are this week's chosen one.
    Lovin' your work.
    *Emma*
     
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