Black Poetry : Beyond Reality

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Apr 29, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you see me
    Beyond your reality
    Can you smell
    The effervescent me
    The energy tickles your imagination
    The passion fuels your desires
    Can you hear
    My heart
    As it beats like a Congo drum
    The love it holds deep inside
    Compels lovers to pledge eternity
    Can you see me?
    Beyond your reality
    The deepness in my soul
    The immortal me
    The legacy
    That will live
    Way beyond the boundaries of human nature
    Can you see
    Me
    Can you dare to stare
    Into my eyes
    And see all the possibilities
    Of you

    Natasha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALL I GOTTA SAY IS YES I CAN !!!!!!
    WOOOOOWEEEEE! DIS HERE PIECE ..
     
  3. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece. The flow is perfect and the words emotive.
    Truly great poetry.
    You go girl!
    *Emma*
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you say?

    Now you speaking deeply within the poets heart.
    And I love the flow of this piece...
    Sweet and surreal:eek:
    Like telling a dream!
    BLESSINS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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