Black Poetry : ~~Beyond Love~~….Syllables Set Ablaze by ~ Keita and Sage ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeeeeeeeeeeeee! snap dis was awesome collabo
    y'all done set it off in here .......tyte much love on dis here
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to angelicsage and Keita

    Now you two are giving me what I have been waiting for
    Words with some order, I will all my short life on earth adore!


    Great poem you have made
    Please go and seize the day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my tread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome read!

    tight drop you two..
    i really enjoyed the read...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was PHENOMENALLY AMAZING...
    smh I found myself falling head over heels line after line...after line...
    breath-taking...
    from the beginning to the end
    SOUL SISTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW
    Brotha Keita...WOW
    all i can reall say is...
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the exquisite manner that you both have, in abundance, this scribe overflows with FIRE. Ya'll are burning up this entire forum, give us a warning or something next time ok? lol Fantastic!!!!!
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!! This is straight up amazing. :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    Just a truly beautiful creation. I hope and pray you two will do it again, eventually. Lovin every line.

    Much love to you both. :heart: :heart:
     
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    Whew! You two done
    turned up the heat in
    here!

    This is an awesome read!
    The imagery! The passion!
    The erotica! Geesh!

    A girl dont need to be
    reading this alone!!!!!

    Tyte Collabo!
    Loving this!!!!
     
  9. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE.
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flame: :flame: :flame:

    "whew"
    I think I might need a towel...d*mn
    this was sizzlin', scorchin' :jawdrop:

    umph, umph, umph...