Black Poetry : Between Us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Jan 22, 2005.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His lips against mine
    Erased any that had ever touched before his kiss
    Something real
    That I can feel tingling through my fingers
    All the way to my toes
    Feeling so poetic
    With him I'm fufilled
    Compleated at this moment
    He intoxicates me
    Without even a drop of liquor
    Leaves me wanting more
    Only him, nothing else
    Right then it's perfect, we're perfect
    He's all I ever needed
    But never knew I wanted
    Or could have in my life
    Words can't describe how i feel
    Nor would I want to put into words
    The bond that we have
    No one could understand it
    Because it's not for anyone else
    It's only between you and me
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We can attempt to put feelings into words, and many come really close to capturing them, but certain moments yes, are only for two. I get you, and enjoyed the flow.
     
  3. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a tyte drop sistah!!! I loved everything about it. And i beseech u to keep writin'em and droppin'em like its hot! :grouphug:
     
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    my sister i do so understand the feeling you gave thanks for sharing a part of you with us nice drop....Angel
     
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    tyte drop sometime even saying it can't express the depth inside
    feeling all of dis here ....
     
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    Long time no flow...

    ...so nice to see you flowing with us again poet
    this was a passionate piece
    that held me in its embrace...until it faded
    and taught me that intimacy on that level
    can only be truly understood by the "he and she"
    that possess it...

    nice flow poet,
    Sage
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uppin it love the vibe....
     
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    Nice piece
    keep that bond between the two
     
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