Black Poetry : BETWEEN "US" and Years

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What just happen
    was I blind or just in denial
    I
    may not understand
    everything happening in my life
    when I thought you was my
    wife
    we worked these years
    long ago to a stall
    now you want make call
    where
    betrayal, hurt n' pain
    live
    in the core of my heart
    where my love live
    yes where it start
    as we sit against the task of time
    only one will rise
    one will shine like fine wine
    while the other
    lay in it's slumber in tears
    crying
    stick me again one last time!

     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unfortunately, breakups are seldom mutual and each go on their merry way.
    Nope, more often one is left heartbroken as the other walks off into the sunset,
    sometimes with another already by their side. Your words expressed the sorrow
    of a breakup perfectly.
     
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    being on my third marriage, you know i've been through the breakup-and-walk-away at least twice. it's never nice...but it can be made better with respectful communication.

    feeling it, $$RICHMAN$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sometime people get lost in there own stumble and refuse to see the reality
    for what they feel is better becomes a nightmare of destruction, let it go !

    Thanks sistah Cocobutterskyn and brotha Baller
     
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