Black Poetry : Between two friends

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 19, 2004.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His eyes meet mine
    And our soul connects
    We try to deny the feelings of a new beginning
    Between two friends

    Thoughts of concern
    And gestures that care
    An ear that listens
    To a heart that hurts
    Comfort is found
    Between two friends

    You are my rock
    And make me whole
    The friendship that is shared between us
    Brings me so much joy
    But thoughts of your lips
    Replays in my mind
    Trying to fight the temptations
    Of making you mine
    Confusion is nothing new
    Between two friends

    I don’t understand
    Why we can’t just be
    Let me be everything your body and mind needs.
    We have the foundation
    To build so much more
    But then I remember
    A girlfriend can come
    Between two friends
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Between two friends, tell me it didn't go down like dat'.

    Nice one, LadyBug
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you posed this, friends, lovers, or both? Nice write...keep flowin.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    poet of the week
    posed well
    flow on...........:angel1:
     
  5. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all the love
     
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    this flow is very lovely
    i like
    Blue :heart:
     
  7. Leaky103

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    I like the flow and I love the situation. So, did you become more than friends?
     
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    Nice poetic flow; interesting train of thought.

    Peace and Blessings.
     
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    Oh I loved this......the story of my life...Nice flow ;)
     
  10. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Ladybug

    Your poem "Memories of Holland" caught my eye, because I live in Holland. And because it's a very nice poem, I decided to read some more of you works.

    I just had to reply to this one. I have been feeling like this for so long, so I can definitely relate to this piece.

    Very nice....

    moham
     
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