- Aug 18, 2008
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i'll take what's ever between the slices thank you
and extra napkins peese
I just love how you kick words around and twist them in such a way that yhe mental page is just so vivid. awesome write as usual
I LOVED THIS JOINT GIRL!!!
your imagery is insane girl
i dont know what's up with all these men messing with you but i might have to come after them for you...
lol awesome write poet
Feed me !!
let me taste da cascading sandwhich of love's meat
bite da essence of such bread feed me and surly i
won't nibble the love aways but redeem the meat to a plenty
I feel ya here ....what once was is no more for another now eat of thy harvest
so true ...instead of a nice tasty sandwhich with prime meat they go a test a sloppy joe well u know one man lost another man's gain !
while he was saying scat kat another one was saying here kitty kitty!