Black Poetry : Between the Slices

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    By my Hands..
    I prepare a sandwhich for you
    For a sandwhich is a personal thing...
    A sandwhich represents love
    Reminds me of Mother...

    Between the slices of bread
    I spread my mayonaise over every corner of you...
    For you were the Love of My Life
    And I thought the World of You.

    I folded the meats of my Love carefully
    so that you may enjoy...
    The flavors of
    me

    Between the slices of bread
    was more than just meat and cheese
    But my undying Devotion to You
    My Hope that would Not Fade
    My Soul that would just not Get The Message!
    That you would never know how to love me
    The way I needed you too

    Oh lover! Between the slices of bread
    I loved you Dammit!
    Soooo many times you ate of my sandwhich
    You Never Knew!
    How those slices soaked up my love for you...
    ohhhhh....

    But now, those days are gone...
    And I will make sandwhiches for someone new
    That knows the love of a woman
    is a valuable thing
    One that knows how to eat of me properly...

    I no longer make sandwhiches for You.
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Apple Pie,
    I just love reading your work. Your emotion and metaphors are always on point. Thank you for feeding me once again. I love the sensuality you described as you made this sandwich for this man...Loved it!!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks LadyBelle, your so sweet. Yes, my friend....I most definitly put my love in those sandwhiches......and he knew. Until I stopped making them.
    And left.

    My mother always said that when you make a meal for someone or share a meal with someone....thats personal. For when we eat of someone, we are most vulnerable.

    But not to fret! I will make sandwhiches again (amongst other things, lol).....and they'll be more bangin' than before.

    Thanks honey!
     
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    are you taking orders?

    i'll take what's ever between the slices thank you

    and extra napkins peese


    :blowkiss:
     
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    I just love how you kick words around and twist them in such a way that yhe mental page is just so vivid. awesome write as usual
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVED THIS JOINT GIRL!!!
    your imagery is insane girl
    i dont know what's up with all these men messing with you but i might have to come after them for you...
    :bam::SuN019::bam::spank:
    lol awesome write poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Feed me !!
    let me taste da cascading sandwhich of love's meat
    bite da essence of such bread feed me and surly i
    won't nibble the love aways but redeem the meat to a plenty

    I feel ya here ....what once was is no more for another now eat of thy harvest
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you want that so'ja? White or wheat bread? You want cheese on that...LOL....thank you sweetie

    Thank you beautiful poet! My, to receive your praise is an honor!


    Yea...go get em' JDN...sniff, sniff...bastard! LOL...Thank you SO much JDN, for I always love when you stop by!



    Thank you my Richie....some folks dont realize how good a sandwhich taste, till it's gone....till they have been released into the world, and tasted some other sloppy sandwhich...yuck!
     
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    so true ...instead of a nice tasty sandwhich with prime meat they go a test a sloppy joe well u know one man lost another man's gain !

    while he was saying scat kat another one was saying here kitty kitty!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard that! he he he....ya makin' me blush Richie.....yea...I think I am ready to come hither...answer the kat call.
     
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