Black Poetry : Between the Sheets

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *IN BETWEEN

    Five Senses come to life: Touch/Taste/Smell/Sound/Sight as I think things through

    *THE SHEETS

    White parchment
    holding passion
    as it fights pain
    goes on all day
    and all night
    ...in between the sheets

    Jotting notes of
    gift wrapped
    noon-time sexual
    pleasures and
    wee hour a.m. delights
    scrawled...
    -- in between the sheets

    Picking loose
    leaf--
    to embody the
    very air
    that I might breathe
    scratching my
    itch to write
    about life
    ...in between the sheets

    I'm wearing a dipthong
    and you see the
    pictorographic images
    of my energy
    narrowly ruled
    ...but you read
    my neat curvacious
    curves of script
    inked by black and white
    ~well poised, and
    corresponding to your
    needs
    ...in between the sheets



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

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    In between the
    sheets hides secrets
    of words with no definition
    trapped in waiting to be
    given the gift of life

    MEANING

    person, place, or thing
    or action word?
    maybe describe a noon
    time fix to get high
    a dangling participle
    a dangling part
    kissed like a nipple
    or the word straddling
    an aqua blue college ruled
    line

    In between the sheets
    lies the tales of hidden
    forests destroyed / just to experience
    reincarnation into this canvas
    poets use to lay down
    scribe

    in cursive as one is pensive
    after following the curves
    of metaphorical mastery
    or sans serif text so the tale
    of the U and the R can be touched
    with a feather tipped quill


    hmmm.well this follow up is not as tight as the original, but, it will have to Suffice! :)

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll have to pass up a dance with you
    on this one, cause I'm running late
    and running out of time...
    got to get my *** up and outta
    da house...

    See you at work!

    Peace and One Luv!!

    (p.s.) thank you for the response! :kiss: :kiss:
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    Can I get in "tweenst" those sheets of yours??? :)

    Lovin' this flow hun!!!


    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this ain't nuthin butt perfeckshun, my sustuh! Ohhh, I'm having such a time today~ rustlin these covers!!!!!!!

    :heart:

    a
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    Mmmmmm. Mmmmm ~ sounds good to me GQ~ :wink:
    Just let me know!!


    One :heart:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A~

    I hear ya' sista friend... Thank you for taking a moment to read the loose leaf -- leather bound pages of me!! :wink:


    One luv sis'.
     
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    Hey now this is hott
    I love the way this was brung
    Beautiful poet
     
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    wow this was good thanks for bring this up tant. flow on poet.
     
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