Black Poetry : between the line

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my eyez see not of cold steel
    yet my heart be of warm coal
    i journey to the end of my street
    i can't stop now yet i can't go on
    inside my tunnel of beings
    i feel the hard rain and know my
    mission is near end
    the hope of tomorrow dems
    the smiles of yesterday gleams
    but today i'm wondering

    The new life of yesteryears
    moved to a place like the ole
    tabaco road in the valley of
    shadows i mirror the picture
    and capture it in the vision
    i see it well before me
    this rope i now hang from
    is the same one many years
    ago hung from the peach tree
    on the river bank road

    i can't see the victory
    and don't know my
    milestone but a finish
    to my chapter is coming
    and the what seem history
    is not mine , i have the realm
    reality from the myth i live with
    so long and had the dream
    but it to lost in the night
    my candle low
    this is my war alone
    i now fight back
    betrayal of eyes
    and the razor sharp blade
    watch me and stick me
    i look away and take it
    the pain is my name
    but now i fight back

    from the underground world
    this my WAR.
    with these handz i write
    with my wordz i fight
    i know i won't win
    but at least i'll know and
    sho i'm a MAN

    let da war begin
    I~DE~CLAIR~WAR
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this is deep my brother
    whats going on in your head tonight...
    come let the Angel take and soothe your
    my mind.....kisses
    i like your flow
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the new underground order
    taken ova .......thankz
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh...well it must be a worthy cause to have one such Royal Richne$$ Sol'ja
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it may be and the war is worthy i know
    a battle i must go to a journey i must face
    the tyme has come to walk the lane not
    in fear but wit da greater pride ....thankz a million
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    wow, this is great, filled with mystery.. hmmm..a journey you seek..
     
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    the mystery of it is in the journey yet i seek dat realm & truth
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    I wish ya as much ease and comfort as I can..
     
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    it shall come to light and comfort follows every time thankz
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep...i know those 'tabaco roads' all to well. lots of love for this one.
     
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