Khasm13 : betta believe...

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  1. Khasm13

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    love don't love nobody
    i see you alone at da party
    but love don't love nobody
    in the distance you hear laughter thas hearty
    if this is the first time you heard this i'm sorry
    but you betta believe dat
    love don't love nobody...

    how come it seems like those
    whose souls have holes
    and shadow stays cold
    have someone to hold
    and those who don't doze
    on da up and up
    mentally/spiritually moving up rows
    are froze
    by love's bitter bite
    reminded of callous hearts at night
    troubled dreams causes pseudo-fights
    falling from great heights
    galvanized by gravity
    afflicted by causality
    demonized by mans dualality
    equals a lovers fatality
    has a rouge cupid's arrow
    rattled thee
    or is it just that there is no love to see
    the strongest force in the universe
    should easily
    be able to find thee
    but no
    what should be easy
    is a mystery
    that plauges your sanity
    "what's wrong with me"
    a ? taller then the tallest tree
    with barren branches
    chilled from the wind thas wintery
    why should you keep doing good
    when dispair is as deep and black
    as the dead sea
    you ask
    "will true love ever find me?"
    or will i walk this path alone
    no one to share my home
    .......
    i see it all written on your face
    as you look at two lovers with distaste
    but i also see love so strong
    so strong is your love to waste
    i see that
    and i see you
    please remember
    haste does not always win the race...

    love don't love nobody
    i see you alone at da party
    but love don't love nobody
    in the distance you hear laughter thas hearty
    if this is the first time you heard this i'm sorry
    but you betta believe dat
    love don't love nobody...

    hello somebody....
     
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    indeed love work in wild mystery wayz
    and it don't care who it grab or bend
    tyte drop
     
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    this is truly a Sonnet..
    feeling of your flow
    the meaning you have filled
    in each line so deep
    my goodness
    taking me to another height
    as i catch my breathe
    as you take the nobody
    and feel somebody
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa......brothah Khasm, you have alliterated my song so very very well. kinda haunted by this part:

    how come it seems like those
    whose souls have holes
    and shadow stays cold
    have someone to hold
    and those who don't doze
    on da up and up
    mentally/spiritually moving up rows
    are froze
    by love's bitter bite


    have thought the same things....actually your whole second stanza....mmmmhmmmm

    I know it's messed up, but it's a relief to know I'm not the only one feels like this. You just made this flow so well, though. One of your best, hands down, man. Gotta give you props and love.

    Peace
     
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    Hello somebody
    Ummmmm…shoot
    Love don’t loves nobody
    It bites you and leaves
    With the venom to die
    Wishing…..
    On da up and up
    I don’t think it was meant
    For the mentally/spiritually
    That one who believes in true love
    Seems to always fall
    To loves cry….
    The dark seems to get
    more glory then the light
    on this insight…
    cupids arrow….
    well if he wanna play games…
    wish he leave me out…..
    B/c for me love don’t live here
    No more…..aint no hello somebody
    Tired of the game….
    So go tell cupid to go on….
    I aint feelin it no more…..
    Loves mystery well it just
    went to hell as I step out the
    blame game…you hurt
    me for the last time
    Love don’t loves nobody
     
  6. Khasm13

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    one time for the poets/poetess
    that will be alone this valentines day...

    never give up hope for a brighter future
    with someone that will love you
    the way you love them...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    This is so beautiful, sad but true!

    I really loved this piece/peace Khasm, it touches the heart, lonely and the heart unfulfilled.
    I think it's for men as well as women, I used to think that it was only women who yearned for that forever kind of love...but after coming to Destee, my faith in the Romantic black man was
    and is restored...so thankful for the love in my life and the life in my love!
    This is one of your best pieces EVER!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    It doesn't always seem fair, or turn out the way we would like, but there's a love out there for everybody....loved the way you posed this.
     
  9. PositiveMindset

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    Dog, U did it again...

    This is the real, it seems as if people who abuses it has it overflowing.

    Haste doesn't always win the race...

    True indeed.
     
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    love don't love nobody
    and hearts dont trust nobody
    unless spirits are uniting somebody
    otherwise you'll fall for anybody
    anyone anywhere
    and somewhere
    my "he" is there
    the one for I
    but Love dont Love nobody
    so until JAH bless me wit my "somebody"
    I continue the road less traveled
    as the wisdom unravels

    those "souls with holes"
    and "someone to hold"
    are headed for the bitter cold
    sooner than later
    because their Love is no greater than the outer can behold
    and the inner is necessary for the foundation to hold
    so u see... Love dont really Love nobody
    its equally decieving to everybody

    Cupid has no arrows
    Aphrodite is no Love Goddess wit golden sparrows
    There is no easy way to "Love"
    REAL Love
    PURE Love
    releasing the holds of the past on the wings of a dove
    Love dont love nobody
    because
    EVERYBODY
    needs to live n' learn the tales of the mistaken "anybody"
    EVERYBODY
    needs to YEARN to be SOMEBODY
    worth lovin in Love that is secure
    Love that is sure
    Love that is PURE
    Love cant love nobody
    it must be unbiased to shake and startle the minds of everybody
    so that when da one TRUE Love approaches you will know..."this is somebody"
    Love dont Love nobody
    but best believe when time is right
    and minds are tight
    and souls are in sight
    than
    Love may not Love nobody...but EVERYBODY will Love...LOVE
     
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