Black Poetry : Betta be Careful

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  1. blacklove

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    You betta becareful of how you treat me
    Because I can always get you while you are sleep.
    You mentally abused me everyday
    Not knowing if I will ever be able to think straight.

    The words you say hurts my heart
    I thought we were close but yet so far.
    I dont understand why you playe these games
    You betta be careful because i can do the same.

    You betta be careful f how you treat me
    You promised to never beat me.
    I will no longer put up with this mess
    I will let God take care of the rest.

    You betta be careful of how you treat me
    Because somebody will put you in your enternal sleep.

    For the ladies that has ever been through something like this, you don have to take it, just fight back with the fire of GOD!!!!!!!
     
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    indeed ya right ..... no one should take dis pain
    and da strike of a hand that stain a promise
    no Queen should feel so un new surely the power
    of almighty will take care da rest
    becareful what's said & done coz u later be on da run
    from da true power for what one done .....indeed ya right
     
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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greatly appreciated, blacklove.
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay BlackLove :wave:

    I'm thanking you too for this peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    He does guide us
    No matter the struggles we go through
    Stay Blessed Much love Sisters Of Destee
     
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    Be careful how you treat me

    I think men who beat their wives for get they give birth to sons who beat their wives who give birth to children who kill parents for they tired fo the mess. If you think like this it might help you think it through it just never stops until you stop it

    Peace

    Glad i not in it no more
     
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