Quiet Poetry Lounge : Betrayed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 23, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BetrayedI trusted you more than anything,
    And claimed you as my friend.
    But I made the biggest mistake,
    And you lied to me in the end.

    I believed you, I trusted you,
    I cared for you, and at times I cried.
    But in the end I didn't get the real truth
    And for so long you lied.

    I can't believe I was so stupid,
    I believed all your lies.
    I made the Biggest mistake
    And now my heart cries.

    So now I'm asking you why?
    Why did you hurt me that way?
    I called on you when I needed help.
    But in the end I was betrayed

    I did everything in my power,
    To make you suceed, to achieve your goals.
    Then you turned your back on me,
    And now my heart is filled with holes.

    I helped you out of problems,
    The secrets that only you and I shared
    You took the guy I was in love with
    We called each other, I told you "I cared"

    I told you my problems
    And at times we both would cry
    I told you my feeling for him
    And in the end the feelings you denied.

    And now I'm the fool
    I believed you, I trusted you
    Now you say you are sorry!!!
    Is that all you have to say????
    But it doesn't matter any more
    Cuz in the end I was still betrayed
     
  2. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece reminds me of something...
    But im not telling...LOL
     
  3. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! once again great poem. I learned the hard way also. Thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice poetic flow .....i'm going to move this in the
    Poetry quiet forum as this forum is for Haikus
    beware where you posting !
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  5. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Betrayal, one of the worst feelings a human heart can encounter. Very real and emotional, expressing emotions that are nothing but human. It's reality.
     
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