Black Poetry : BETRAYED

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Jan 10, 2004.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GOOD RIDDANCE
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting read!! keep ya head up!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt u deeply i know betrayal well
    keep ya head up and moving forward
    soon the wrongdoes will become a myth
    tyte scribe da block is lifted !!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, you wrote your way right out of that block..and a very nice write too.
     
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    whattttttttttt???

    How u gonna tell a sista to critique and don't criticize when I can't help but say this was a helluva good write. Writers block must be your booster cuz i totally felt you there.


    and I ain't saying this just to say this, maybe I have been in the position u describe so much...alls I can say is, share some more


    The Dreamer :rolling:
     
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