Black Poetry : Betrayed

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  1. ebonygoddess

    ebonygoddess Active Member MEMBER

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    We did what we did,
    and I hold no regrets,
    It was an exchange of love,
    where our hearts finally met,
    Well, that's what I believed.
    You told me that you love me,
    And you'll stay by my side,
    You whispered words with sincerity,
    As you plunged deep inside,
    And now our seed is growing,
    And I don't know what to do,
    I told you I'm with child,
    and you said it's not for you.
    At first I was confused,
    Baffeled by what I was hearing,
    You uttered words of betrayel,
    I could feel my heart tearing.
    I tried my hardest not to cry
    Cause I see now, your not worth my tears,
    But in my heart I was sobbing,
    As the word echoed through my ears.
    I yelled " I thought we was meant to be,
    and our love is really true".
    He replied " the devil comes to man
    In the shape of a woman
    But i didn't think it'd be you".
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....i like this...
     
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    wow....
     
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    well well well !!!!!
    this was off da hook
    felt every line u scribe
    dis was deep and real
     
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    :grouphug: for you, ugh no more drama! these men suck!
     
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    ebonygoddess Active Member MEMBER

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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww....

    :grouphug:ebonygoddess:grouphug:

    This here truly touched me, Sis. You truly captured some feelings in Word.

    Touching.

    Where's the :coward: emoticon?
    :court::uzi:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ebonygoddess

    Welcome to Destee.

    This is a very nice flow. Thanks for sharing. If he acts this way he be wrong. His denial doesn't change the fact. A baby will be born. And need the parents to have their back.
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ebony, I just finished writing a months worth of the same topic. Girl, my heart breaks for you, but please be strong. For yourself and your baby's health. Man, I feel for you, been here.
     
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    Thank u. I was young and foolish and God still blessed me in the midst of it all. My Girl is my life and her father doesn't deserve her.
     
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