Black Poetry : BETRAYED BY "U"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I FEEL THE PAIN NOW
    DRIP! MY TEARS
    I FEEL THE SADNESS
    AS DARKNESS COVER ME
    IN A WET PATH ON BETRAYAL

    I HEAR THE SOUNDS OF YA VOICE
    AS IT ECHO THROUGH MY SOUL
    MY HEART IS BROKEN INTO MILLIONS

    NOW I TOUCH THE PLACE IN MY HEART WHERE
    U ONCE WAS SO SOFT YET NOW HARDEN
    U BETRAYED ME WITH ANOTHER
    U GAVE MY TREASURE AWAY
    AS MY HEART FOR YA LONELY LUST
    SO NOW YA GONE INTO A UNZONED CARESS

    I FEEL THE PAIN
    I FEEL THE HURT
    WORDS UNSPOKEN OF
    BEAUTY LIES IN MANY FACES
    YET MINES BE SADLY GRACED
    U BETRAYED ME !
    U SEAL THE FATE WITH A KISS OF DEATH
    I DIED SLOWLY INSIDE
    WATCHING U ROAM YA LUSTFUL NOTIONS
    WITH A THOUGHT OF LOVE I ONCE WAS
    MY HEART SHO DARK SPADED COLOR
    I MISSED THE SOUNDS U VOICED
    AS U CRY IN UMMMMMMMS!! & AhhhhhhhhS!!
    AND U LEAVE A SCARE UPON ME
    NOW I HAVE TO TREASURE WHAT WAS LEFT BEHIND
    MY BLUE NOTE OF SADNESS ONLY SPEAK
    IN BROKEN WORDS
    U BETRAYED ME FOR THE LAST TYME
    I'M DYING INSIDE SELF MOTIONS
    U BECOME A HOT TOPIC OF BLISS
    NOW UR ON YA OWN
    FREE 2 ROAM YA LUSTFUL GLIST TO EMOTIONAL
    SEXUALITY IN WAVES AND YA BURN LIKE FIRE
    YET BETRAYAL BE OF U WHOM WILL SEE IN
    THEE END ........SADLY WRITTEN IN VOW
    U BETRAYED ME .YEAH! U
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$....

    ....feelin' your pain. this was a very emotional piece.

    thanks for sharing...

    LovesStillAlryght...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ITS AN EMOTIONAL THING SUNSHYNE TO FINE
    SO MANY MISTAKES MADE ..........THANX
    4 YA SUPPORT


    CINDY YA RIGHT
    IN TYME SOON ONE WILL SEE
    THAT THE LOVE OF ME WAS REAL
    AND HE WHOM BE IS ONLY A DEAL
    YET IT KILLS ME INSIDE TO SEE
    THE BEST LEFT BEHIND
    THANX 4 YA WORDS OF KINDNESS
     
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    Your $$RICH$$NESS

    your heart is not alone
    in this sadness
    i'm right here
    with you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BESIDE ME U BRING SMILES THANK U DESTEE...
     
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    mr. flying lover

    ya heart is felt within me
    yo pain i feel as i weep
    beside u but i am here
    to ease yo pain as i call yo name
    caress yo broken heart cum to me

    des is so emotional
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEE HONEYLUV THERE U GO AGAIN
    GIVIN YA HEART I LOVE YA WITHIN
    THANK U ......HAVE YA EVER BEEN BETRAYED?
     
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    WHEN BETRAYAL SET FORTH
    DA FEELIN IS TO A NUMB
    AND ONLY PAIN ID FELT WITHIN

    WHY ME !!!

    NOW I MOVE ALONE
    MY JOURNEY FAR OF BASE
    I FACE THE NEW BEGININGS
    LAID BEFORE ME
    IS THIS MY PATH TO TRUE LOVE
    OR ANOTHER STEP TO A MYTH??
     
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    I've been betrayed before

    And the way she did you wasn't cool at alll Rich.
    i JUST want u to know its all her loss, not yours
    If anything it was your gain.
    My heart goes out to u babe.

    Don't worry...What goes around, comes around.

    Rremember that sweetie
    :heart:
    SwtNess
     
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    Rich this is beautiful as all of your work man with much wisdom
     
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