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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dome spin as I atone for my sin at home begin all training
    If home training was a feast I’ll be a piece of beef maintaining
    on a plate at a party reserved everbody served my flavor even
    The neighbor ate a plate yelling it taste great aroma kicks like Steven
    Stegall, my faults are caught in street fought the heat of the cops
    On the down low, diminish foes and finish clothes with
    A sewing machine now glowing clean in Rocawear a gift
    For swift kids in the Ghetto can’t let go of name brand
    Clothes got plans and woes about life I just don’t understand
    If clothes were a river they’ll have flows that deliver wetness
    Like a stream of water and do an extreme slaughter regret this
    How my pockets are empty even Davy Crockette’ll simply twist
    With a bucket of muskets loaded to shoot bear this stuff is very brisk
    The king of the wild frontier my style punks fear yall best serinade
    whack cats got grenades in their prankster pants think they got it made
    Gangters don’t dance battling is fun with gattling guns only cut them braids
    If life was a knife it’ll be a sharp blade that make hearts afraid
    Of being cut I’m seeing sluts on the up that wanna hurt me and parade
    In battles and laid the saddles for failure too much paraphanalia exists
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is this Maddrapper?

    seriously....

    it was cool..

    kinda lost me somewhere in there....reminds me of some Doom shhh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook wit a bend and twist .....flow on !
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo rthe propsand critique had todo this right here
     
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    yup...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was having the same thoughts!!
    i knew i wasn't the only one.
    I likes...
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR ALL THE REPLIES IT MAYBE CONFUSING BUT IT'S THERE WITH A HAND FULL OF FLAVOR DOE
     
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