Black Poetry : BEST MAN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 1, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A FREE Blackman had a novel plan

    To go for bad... he took a stand

    Unlike undercover spooks

    Who CAN be smothered

    His babies' mama,

    Had ALL his lovin'

    His own Best Man,

    In this crooked land

    He was good to GO

    As an African...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :peace:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nICE DROP BRO, TO THE POINT, KEEP THEM COMING!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had me dancin in th radiant of this one
     
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    Brutha...got my mind workin again :thinking:....really dug this poem....especially the last lines

    "His own Best Man,

    In this crooked land

    He was good to GO

    As an African..."

    He was good to go as an african....hmmm...what a beautiful statement made!...


    keep the flow goin

    Mz.Soull
    aka prizefighter
     
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    Regal kings constantly being stripped of their crowns. Yet another tight write poet.
     
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