Black Poetry : Best Gold is..."Old Gold"

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We stumbled across this place, for some odd reason,
    and we've been here now, for almost a season.
    There was so much to see, and even more to learn,
    and making us comforable, was their major concern.
    Red carpet, of course, was laid at our feet...
    and royality such as this...can never be beat.
    We met the best people, there is... to ever meet,
    when we enter the chatroom...they make us feel complete.

    ~*~
    I met "$$RICH$$" ...yes of course...he was the first,
    I now read his work, and respond with a "flirt". :flirt:
    ~*~
    Mzblakangel ...she 'giggled :lol: her way in our hearts,
    but we've grown to luv her...she ranks high on our chart.
    ~*~
    Now "Destee", mind you, ...is a real work of art,
    but somehow she manage to, ...crawl into our hearts :heart:
    ~*~
    And way under the sand...slides the rattle "snake"
    but worry not python...we'll let :nono: no one, take your place.
    ~*~
    And by the way "Watz"...I really like your style,
    you're the reason why ...I plan to stay awhile. :wink:
    ~*~
    I gotta talk to "Nita", cause she better slow her :roll: roll,
    since she divorced that, "no-good" man...she's gotten out of control.
    ~*~
    "Changes" and "Keita", are always talking :read: ...to one another,
    and when we see them coming ...we all run for cover.
    ~*~
    I don't know what to say about "Aqil" ...with his 50/11 wifes,
    he don't know that each of them, ...are secretly packing knifes. :fight:
    ~*~
    "Money" is the ladies man, :luvv: they all enjoy his pose,
    I luv you too money ...and thank you for the "rose".
    ~*~
    "Triniti" is the party starter :party: , she keeps that big but swinging,
    but I luv you girl, just because...you keep our heart strings, singing.
    ~*~
    "Khasm" is a real live poet, that takes no crap, :driveby: from no one,
    since he's the best, he'll beat hands down, ...anyone under the sun.
    ~*~
    "Bluewater" is the serious poet...one who really care,
    glad to know that you're around ...thanks for being here. :thanks:
    ~*~
    "Angelic Sage" ...you're in a class by yourself,
    with me, you sit...on the highest shelf.
    you're wisdom reach, from state-to-state,
    and you're intellect stops...at the pearly gates. :fairy:
    the "secret storm" :puke: that we all respect,
    and I'm ever so graceful ...that we met.

    There are many names that I didn't mention,
    but know in your hearts ...you got my attention.
    I just didn't have time, to name all the names,
    but one things for sure...I luv you the same.
    :luvv: ​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very cute and well blessed scribe
    and how u too my heart deep inside
    happy u two has become apart and
    set standards of love as i roam above
    the way y'all enter the house wit creation
    and made a splash much love back at ya !!!
    this was awesome sweet happy y'all family
    thankz
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, Queen, what a sweet tribute to your fellow poets! Very creative
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here, Here Queen
    Wonderful tribute and extremely clever
    nicely done...much :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    Awww, queent, that was an awfully sweet thing to say. Wow. You know, I am so happy that your whole family is here, with ours, sharing poetry thoughts, and just, being. You have a intuitiveness about you, that I really admire. This was such a thoughtful scribe, and written with flair. Much appreciated.
     
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    this is real cute:):) Even though you didn't mention my name:mad: it's all good:peace:
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must keep it real,
    without sounding like I'm a real weird-o, I must admit that I didn't use your name because I'm not sure how to pronounce it...silly me. :court: :laugh: but I luv you just as much. Infact...tell me how to say your name.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well queen, looks like you outdid yourself honey. Loved it!!!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    Oh sis this was so sweet....
    I love ya too...happy you found us
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Awwwwwwwwwww sista that is SO Sweet :) :grouphug: of course only our sister QUEENT could have that particular loving touch (what do yall think keeps keita in check :look: hehehe)
    Yes sista our famlee is wonderful....ALL of us OLD & NEW :heart:
    but ummmmm... am I perhaps passing my self in age or did you say i had a big butt QQ *lookin for YOUR hamma to use on ya QQ* lolol MUCH love my beautiful sista :)
     
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