Black Poetry : Best Friends....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whats wrong with you…
    you cant tell me it aint nothing wrong…
    come girl…..
    Well, if you wont say…
    I am placin my two cent in here right now….
    put dat pan down
    Forget his dinner
    Come sit…..
    It is time
    To respect
    yourself
    Love
    yourself
    And
    deal with
    Yourself
    For if he
    loved ya
    He wont hit ya
    If he cared
    He wouldn’t
    Belittle ya…
    Smoother
    you with his
    Talk
    His ways
    And
    by his will
    Your to grow
    Not stay and
    Grow old
    its up to you
    I am here to help you
    Not hurt you
    Or make your
    choice for you
    But to love you
    Not to school ya
    But ta hold yo hand
    In your life of
    Choices..
    Stand up for
    yo self
    Believe in
    yo self
    But please love
    thy self….
    Momma didn’t raise no fool
    Now shake whatever
    Off
    And take your life back
    Hold ya
    head up
    Show you
    got respect
    for who you are……
    You don’t need no man
    That brings you down like dat….
    Be proud see
    You’re a queen
    The most beautiful thang
    God ever created
    You are a black woman…
    You bring life
    You’re a pot of gold
    To be cherished
    Not abused
    Never let a man steal your joy
    Take his if any….
    You lead the way
    Have faith
    This all will pass…
    My child I love you
    Never tell ya nothing wrong…
    But I am gonna help ya heal….
    I am your support….

    a blkangel thang

    :kiss:
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    awww this is sweet blkangel:angel1:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wrote a song kinda like this....this is very nice...
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the read...
    not a song
    it my life
    cant never compare
    to any song
    coz this was my song...
    no harm but
    for i live it...so the words are true.....
    like yesterday sittin in the kitchen
    with my mother my best friend....
    but glad you feelin me.....LovelyGoldenOne
    i like to read yo song if u dont mine...peace
    ty again sis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up save her ..............
    i love thius here
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I give you a standing ovation on this right here....i wrote a piece on the same subject ...it was from an experience that an old friend of mine went through......We as ppl can only say so much....you get mad props for beings the supportive one in the peom:) :) :)
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty swtt
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwww! this is so very touching....specially since you said it was true. Thanks for the honor of letting us in to that place.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys for readin just something i was feelin today...
    you know got them mood swings goin on lol
     
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