Black Poetry : Best Friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 1, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've been at da end
    i've search & seek
    i found my friend
    away from betrayal
    away from the myth
    away from the lies
    inside i found all da
    qualities not pretend
    oh my what a friend
    I know it was hard to find
    but far most one must be
    kind know my thoughts
    before i speak
    be strong when i'm feeling
    weak
    da one that make me shine
    bring smiles in place of frowns
    one that will listen to my heart
    feel my pain when it start
    know my direction and will
    understand always come up
    wit a plan even be gentle
    soft and demand
    i've seek dis in a true friend
    one that's close like my kin
    that will share my inner
    thoughts and give advice
    not blame me or coz a fight
    one to feel da hope and fulfill
    it in grace and known to lean
    on give knowledge & wisdom
    that can't be bought
    and pools of love dat i sought
    one that forgives me for my sins
    treasure me as thee friend
    and when i was at my last rope
    they step up giving me hope
    one friend that never turn their back
    even when i seem off and whack
    this friend i found is so true so today
    i tribute this for u to say i love and
    thank u too for being da friend :new:
    :heart: :spinstar: :huh: :spinstar: :heart:

    this for u and u know who u are !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have a friend like that....it's worth is priceless. You are a lucky man indeed to have such a true friend, quite a blessing. This read like it was from the heart.
     
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    WONDERFUL FLOW..A TRUE FRIEND INDEED
    AS YOU KNOW A REAL FRIEND IS HARD TO FIND...
    I THINK THEY CHERISH YOU JUST AS MUCH...:wink:
    YOUR HEART SPEAKS VOLUMES IN THIS ONE!!!! :heart:
    PEACE
    ANGEL
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's truly a blessing to find such a friend..well such an earthly friend.... I thought I found this kinda friend myself... but I secretly wanted somethin more and ended up wit nothing. But I know I'll never find a better friend than the one livin in my heart. This poem was also heartfelt. Whoever you are....don't stop what ya doin. :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz indeed there friendship is so worthy of and warm
    i wouldn't trade it for nothing priceless and rare to find hope it's
    heard loud and clear surely it's from the heart .

    thankz Angel yes indeed so hard to find but once u do the task end
    and a bond is born i will never give it up or cross it coz it means so
    much to me hope the message float so it's known friendship is a rare
    jewel so i tribute it all in my confession

    thankz chastity......so true value the friendship it's worth more the
    gold more then diamonds more the money just priceless and i really
    hope it's felt coz my heart speaks here of such a prime jewel of friend
    i'll never give it up or turn my back never i am da bridge that will stand
    and i wish they know that coz i love 'em from da heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    All This For u , u know who u are !
    tonight i flow in our foreverness
    a tribute to u dear rare friend ......
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, I feel this. What a wonderful tribute. I think having a good friend is the best gift you can have. Beautiful piece, $$RICH$$ness.
     
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    yes gempis ur right it really makes life a little better knowing u have
    someone in your corner dat's what friends are for .thank u so much
     
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    when we speak of best friendz who come to mind
    what is ya vision well i know my true friend ........
     
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    It's always a sweet deal :deal: to find a friend a friend like this!
    Brave poet and scribe on! :bomb:
     
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